Guide · Introduction

Writing the introduction.

Open with one or two lines: a definition, a fact with a source, or the context the question sets, tied to the directive. Toppers do not warm up. Below are real opening lines from topper answers in the bank, and the three openings that cost marks.

By Gaurav Singh and Aditya Tiwari·Published ·Bank updated ·Updated

Real topper openings

Opening lineTopper
Sociological imagination is the process through which the body of knowledge is evidently examined and concluded with generalisation.Rajeshwari Suve M (AIR 2)
Optional 2025
Jan Vishwas Act, 2023 aims to decriminalise minor offences across various acts to reduce scope of harassment.Akansh Dhull (AIR 3)
GS2 2025
Infrastructure needs around $55 Bn. p.a. investment for the next 15 years as per World Bank estimates. It adds to the productive capacity of the Economy.Raghav Jhunjhunwala (AIR 4)
GS3 2025
Desmond Tutu famously observed that compassion is one when one is moved to act to alleviate the other's suffering. It involves courage of conviction to stand up for what is right.Ishan Bhatnagar (AIR 5)
GS4 2025
Laying the preface to Indian edifice of Constitutionalism, the 42nd Amendment added gravitas to the political culture, stratography and structure via addition of Socialist and Secular.Zinnia Aurora (AIR 6)
GS2 2025
Jawahar Lal Nehru, in his book "Discovery of India", highlights civilisational continuity in the democratic ethos of India from "Samiti" of Rig Vedic Times.Pakshal Secretry (AIR 8)
GS2 2025
Indian knowledge tradition dates back to early ages rooted in Vedic tradition and carried throughout ages.Astha Jain (AIR 9)
GS4 2025
Ashwathama, the son of Guru Dranacharya, vowed to avenge the defeat of Kauravas and used the divine weapon "Brahmastra" to kill the foetus in the womb of Uttara. This would have ensured an end of the lineage of the Kuru clan.Ujjwal Priyank (AIR 10)
Essay 2025

Quoted from published answer booklets. Every answer in the bank links to its booklet page on the topper answers pages.

Four openings that work

  • Definition, from a named source.
  • A fact or figure with a year.
  • Recent context: a judgment, a report, a scheme.
  • The directive, answered in a line, for critically examine and discuss.

Openings that cost marks

  • "Since time immemorial", "In today’s world": they say nothing.
  • Restating the question.
  • A paragraph of background before the answer starts.

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Questions

How long should the introduction be?

One or two lines for a 10-marker, two or three for a 15-marker.

Should every answer start with a definition?

No. Pick the opening that suits the directive; a fact or recent context often works better.

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